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09 October 2006 @ 12:27 am
"Enough" - A Peter/Susan fic  
Alright, here's just a really short fic I wrote. There's actually a story behind this one - technically I wrote it as Susan, my ex Dan as Peter, and his new thing (maybe? no idea) Megan. All this stuff is true. Just...fictionalised?


After a few days, the letters stopped. The occasional telephone call stopped. The speaking stopped.

Susan blinked.

What have I done?

That statement didn’t contain an ounce of guilt. It was sodden down with confusion, dripping with denial.

She hadn’t done anything. Sure they had broken up. That may’ve not even been possible, given that her ex was also her older brother. But that’s how it felt at the time. That same night…

“Susan, lunch with you would be wonderful, will you go with me?”

Peter had placed a small kiss on her lips.

Wait a moment, she wanted to scream, didn’t you just end what we had?!

She had said nothing, settling herself into his kiss, and the role of his whore.


She’d rather let herself be used by him than be forgotten, that was for sure. She’d rather let him run his hands over her than feel nothing. It was so unreal, the realization that he was actively using her. And she knew it.


The day she found out who Megan was she collapsed on the floor in sobs. Sure, she had expected it, sure she kept telling herself she was a placeholder. Once he found someone better, he’d drop her. Still…repetition didn’t make it hurt any less.

Nothing, nothing would make it hurt any less, save him...




Current Mood: sadsad
Current Music: White Flag, Dido
marwen17 on October 9th, 2006 08:08 pm (UTC)
It was... interesting.
lyss.xsay_goodnight on October 9th, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
Different... I can't see Peter using Susan like that. Eswpecially because they are brother and sister and if they did anything like that, well in my mind, Peter would have to love her to cross those lines.

But it was sad nonetheless. And I'm sorry for whatever happened to you.
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Miss Insignifi-CUNTsabrejet81 on June 21st, 2008 06:47 am (UTC)
Just making your links clickable.
Trust me, you'll thank me for this.
I don't know why they just weren't clickable in the first place.